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From: Noah Shamir [mailto:noah.shamir@gmail.com]
Sent: Wednesday, October 24, 2018 9:58 AM
To: Oshrat Appel; Oshrat Appel
Cc: Shai Cohen; Ofer Beeri; יניב גלבשטיין; shimonz; materials@mdpi.com
Subject: Re: [Materials] Manuscript ID: materials-379442 - Major Revisions

 

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המשך שבוע נעים,

נח

 

 

On Wed, Oct 24, 2018 at 8:20 AM Niki Chang <niki.chang@mdpi.com> wrote:

Dear Mrs. Appel,

Thank you for submitting the following manuscript to Materials:

Manuscript ID: materials-379442
Type of manuscript: Article
Title: Surface oxidation of TiNiSn (Half-Heusler) alloy by oxygen and water
vapor
Authors: Oshrat Appel *, Shai Cohen, Ofer Beeri, Noah Shamir, Yaniv
Gelbstein, Shimon Zalkind *
Received: 12 October 2018
E-mails: oshratba@post.bgu.ac.il, scking1@gmail.com, ofer.beeri@gmail.com,
noah.shamir@gmail.com, yanivge@bgu.ac.il, shimonz@nrcn.gov.il
Heusler and Half-Heusler Compounds
http://www.mdpi.com/journal/materials/special_issues/heusler_half_heusler_compounds

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